Resumes – It Is Not Their Job To Care, It Is Your Job To Make Them Care

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Once upon a time, it was standard format to have an opening statement on your resume stating what you want.  It went something like, “Amazing professional looking for the opportunity to grow and contribute to a progressive company….”

The problem with that today is twofold: The people reading your resume do not believe that nor do they care what you want.

It is not their job to care about what you want.  It is your job to make them care about what you offer. The focus of this article is that opening paragraph or lead of your resume.

Your resume is not really all about you – it is about what you can do for them.  Put yourself in their position: they have a boatload of yahoos applying for the position that you are perfect for – how are they going to find you?

You have to prove yourself.  You need to grab their attention by speaking their language and driving right to what is important to them and how you are the solution to their needs.

This opening paragraph needs to grab them and their interest to continue to read the rest of your resume.  To identify your value and peak enough interest for a conversation.

When I write resumes, this opening is the last thing I write.  I do a comprehensive analysis, review and composition of the work history to get a full understanding of my clients’ value.  I know in detail and have provided in demonstrative form their value.

Now I know what I am selling about them.  I know their value.  From that I can write to that in a condensed, attention getting manner.  It is the summary of the whole.

When writing your opening, analyze yourself and what it is about you that you are selling.

What do you bring to the table?  What are the most important qualities, skills, attributes that you bring that are of most value to them?  What sets you apart?

Often I see an opening stating that the individual has 15 years’ experience – is that the most important element?  It could be an important contributing factor, yet length of time in an organization or industry does not equate to quality or value.  What did you do in those 15 years, how is that a benefit?

That opening paragraph is your answer to their most important question: ‘What can you do for me?’

Do not let them assume.  It is not enough to say you are familiar with something, knowledge of it or have managed it.  You are assuming that they know that means you are good at this thing.  Telling the reader that you have managed a large group of people or locations does not mean you are good at it.  It means that was what your job was, not your value.

What was the value of you managing these people or locations?  How did you do it?  Who benefited and how – the individuals, teams, clients and company; was their improved performance, morale, communication, commitment, quality, service, revenues, opportunities – and what did that translate to?

Tell the reader not only what you do but why that is important.  You can manage a team but why is that important, what was the value?  Start with the meager ‘manage team of 50’ and integrate the value: aligned the company vision with short and long term goals engaging the team; reduced turnover, improved performance, realized year over year record setting profits, streamlined processes for reduced costs, increased efficiency and improved customer satisfaction.

Do not hold back here, you are selling yourself so go for it.  If you have that very common and huge stumbling block of that little voice in your head saying you are bragging, put the proof in the pudding.  Instead of saying “I’m great at this” and leaving it at that – which is a bragging type perspective; tell them what you do, how you do it and the value received.

When you simply describe what and how you do with the benefit included you are no longer bragging, you are explaining.  This is also demonstrating.  Therefore it sounds confident, not cocky, and you can relax because you are simply telling the story of what you do and how.  It helps shut that little voice in your head up. You are describing and demonstrating not bragging and stating.

You have the goods to go after this position, now it is your job to prove it to the reader.  Think about what is important to them, demonstrate it by describing what you do and the value it provides others and you are well on your way to that conversation about when can you start.


As the Founder and Principle of Career Polish, Inc., a national career coaching and practice firm, I am an Executive Brand Strategist, Resume Writer and Career Coach. I work with individual clients, companies, leadership and teams to identify, strengthen and effectively communicate their brand, engagement, commitment and most importantly – their value – by learning and leveraging LinkedIn, resumes, networking, communication, relationship management, presence and influence.
I help people get from where they are in their jobs to where they want to be in their careers.

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